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Salty air and the sea 
accent the grains perfectly;
names written, secrets hidden;
diary locked by the waves.

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  1. Date: 9/5/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Hi Melani, an awesome good win...PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:37:00 PM
    Great flow to this winning work.Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:55:00 PM
    Oh loved this....I've written thoughts like this in the sand!...congratulations

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:05:00 PM
    Melani, congrats on your win with this lovely acrostic! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:04:00 PM
    Melani, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:31:00 PM
    lovely write...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:54:00 PM
    Congratulations for your win in my contest.This one had a very nice feeling to it.

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 2:37:00 PM
    This was full of serene beauty, w/a touch of mystery (secrets hidden). Excellent job!

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 1:21:00 PM
    Hi Melani, Nice acrostic write you have here...Well done.. Ken..