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Sanctum

There is a place inside,
Maybe deep in my heart,
Where I sometimes hide,
When I fall apart.

Many secrets here I keep,
All my feelings, too,
The dreams when I sleep,
And my wishes to come true.

It is where I can go,
When life is just to much,
I let my emotions flow,
And I am out of touch.

I am happy in that place,
Even when my heart is sad,
All the troubles that I face,
Suddenly don't seem so bad.

In this place I can fly,
Way up to the stars,
The moon passes me by,
And I could soar so far.

It is a world of fantasy,
Maybe deep in my mind,
It can take away my misery,
There's no better place to find.



August 30th, 2013


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  1. Date: 6/11/2015 11:02:00 PM
    Kelly.. Enjoyed this spiritual write and winner!

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 6/16/2015 10:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Dave. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
  1. Date: 6/10/2015 5:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on the spot achieved here Kelly..'

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 6/15/2015 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the kind congrats, Joe!
  1. Date: 6/10/2015 12:23:00 PM
    Your holy of holies is a place where nobody intrudes; there you can be safe with your thoughts and dreams. Congrats on this lovely win, Kelly. All the best...hugs // paul

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 6/14/2015 12:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, absolutely and it is a place where I can truly feel free and be myself... Thank you very much for the kind congrats and comments, Paul... Hugs :)
  1. Date: 6/9/2015 11:52:00 AM
    KELLY. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**

  1. Date: 6/9/2015 9:24:00 AM
    we all need a place we can escape to kelly - lovely descriptive write congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 6/11/2015 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes we do, especially when life becomes too hectic... Thank you Jan, for the kind congrats and comments! Hugs :)
  1. Date: 6/9/2015 9:05:00 AM
    Congrats on your win my friend. Love this image ladened write. I too want to fly..A7

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 6/11/2015 6:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the kind congrats and comments, Robert. I'm glad you liked this older poem of mine, my friend!
  1. Date: 6/8/2015 10:26:00 PM
    That place is in a book for me! Im glad you are able to reach that place of yours Kelly. Maybe I'll see you from the moon one day :) Congrats on your win too

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 6/11/2015 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I do find that place in books, as well... Thank you for the kind congrats and comments. I really appreciate it, Mark!
  1. Date: 7/18/2014 12:05:00 PM
    Beautiful write. We all have that happy place we go to, we introspect deep within. Your happy place is described really well. No hate, no sorrow, no pain, and all life's nonsense out of the way. A persons mind is the one thing that is truly his, and as long as he has it, he is free.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 7/22/2014 5:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I agree, Rohan. The mind holds endless possibilities of freedom, and all we need do is use our imaginations.... Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. I really do appreciate it!
  1. Date: 2/11/2014 8:09:00 PM
    nice win Kelly, . Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 10:01:00 AM
    Kelly, .. Congratulations:) thank you for supporting my contest...... xOx ~LINDA

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 1/8/2014 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Linda, thank you for the placement, once again! :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 8:32:00 AM
    Kelly What a clever and creative write. Everyone needs a place to escape when they can't deal with day to day issues anymore. Dreaming is a great way to lose yourself for a while and feel happy. Nice job Thanks for the wonderful comment on my You Flipped My World poem. Hugs

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 5:40:00 PM
    I know that place so well, my wife tells me I am thee worlds number one dreamer, and she can never reach me, because I spend so much time there. Wonderful poem you have created here Kelly...peter

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 7:28:00 PM
    Incredible you were right. The flow is rhythmic, Your words launch my creative mind into flight where dreams always come true. You have a special gift. We have a lot in common so peaceful is the mind TY

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:15:00 PM
    that one just rattled my bones i relate totally excellent piece kelly

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 4:11:00 PM
    wow! Kelly, you are right i love this. I don't know this place yet.. I have no peace in me.. No I am not dark..but, I can't seem to find the place where i can be free from it all. I like this place where all your fantasies and feelings roam away from all bad situations... excellent write...Linda

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 5:44:00 PM
    I couldn't agree more with this. Soak in your domain and fly high. Excellent!

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 3:01:00 PM
    Hey Kelly, I know that place so well, and I love to be there, that's where I get in touch with me. well written my fiend, thank you......peter

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 12:01:00 PM
    HI Kelly, We all need sanctuary sometimes...Nice write.. Regards, Ken

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 7:22:00 PM
    Impressive write Kelly. Smooth flow which I like also.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 6:00:00 PM
    I love your inner sanctum, it is an indulgence where the soul can roam free, as Saint Theresa of Avila stated, the soul has many room and unless we learn to flit and fly through each one, we shall never be truly free, you are an inspiration to me dearest one, sending you a treasured hug, and warm friendship thoughts xxx