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Sanctum

There is a place inside,
Maybe deep in my heart,
Where I sometimes hide,
When I fall apart.

Many secrets here I keep,
All my feelings, too,
The dreams when I sleep,
And my wishes to come true.

It is where I can go,
When life is just to much,
I let my emotions flow,
And I am out of touch.

I am happy in that place,
Even when my heart is sad,
All the troubles that I face,
Suddenly don't seem so bad.

In this place I can fly,
Way up to the stars,
The moon passes me by,
And I could soar so far.

It is a world of fantasy,
Maybe deep in my mind,
It can take away my misery,
There's no better place to find.

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  1. Date: 7/18/2014 12:05:00 PM
    Beautiful write. We all have that happy place we go to, we introspect deep within. Your happy place is described really well. No hate, no sorrow, no pain, and all life's nonsense out of the way. A persons mind is the one thing that is truly his, and as long as he has it, he is free.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 7/22/2014 5:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I agree, Rohan. The mind holds endless possibilities of freedom, and all we need do is use our imaginations.... Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. I really do appreciate it!
  1. Date: 2/11/2014 8:09:00 PM
    nice win Kelly, . Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 10:01:00 AM
    Kelly, .. Congratulations:) thank you for supporting my contest...... xOx ~LINDA

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 1/8/2014 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Linda, thank you for the placement, once again! :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 8:32:00 AM
    Kelly What a clever and creative write. Everyone needs a place to escape when they can't deal with day to day issues anymore. Dreaming is a great way to lose yourself for a while and feel happy. Nice job Thanks for the wonderful comment on my You Flipped My World poem. Hugs

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 5:40:00 PM
    I know that place so well, my wife tells me I am thee worlds number one dreamer, and she can never reach me, because I spend so much time there. Wonderful poem you have created here Kelly...peter

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 7:28:00 PM
    Incredible you were right. The flow is rhythmic, Your words launch my creative mind into flight where dreams always come true. You have a special gift. We have a lot in common so peaceful is the mind TY

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:15:00 PM
    that one just rattled my bones i relate totally excellent piece kelly

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 4:11:00 PM
    wow! Kelly, you are right i love this. I don't know this place yet.. I have no peace in me.. No I am not dark..but, I can't seem to find the place where i can be free from it all. I like this place where all your fantasies and feelings roam away from all bad situations... excellent write...Linda

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 5:44:00 PM
    I couldn't agree more with this. Soak in your domain and fly high. Excellent!

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 3:01:00 PM
    Hey Kelly, I know that place so well, and I love to be there, that's where I get in touch with me. well written my fiend, thank you......peter

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 12:01:00 PM
    HI Kelly, We all need sanctuary sometimes...Nice write.. Regards, Ken

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 7:22:00 PM
    Impressive write Kelly. Smooth flow which I like also.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 6:00:00 PM
    I love your inner sanctum, it is an indulgence where the soul can roam free, as Saint Theresa of Avila stated, the soul has many room and unless we learn to flit and fly through each one, we shall never be truly free, you are an inspiration to me dearest one, sending you a treasured hug, and warm friendship thoughts xxx