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its odd he first to die dropped in a river with cinderblock bracelets eyes open to his unseen world lips parted for voiceless joy he clinks to the bottom and bubbles rise. forever set motionless to swim with the fish

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Date: 4/27/2015 4:54:00 PM
Wow very dark tale,made worse by the sadness and untimly horrid death,made a wee bit sweeter by your poetic jargon that I enjoyed,thank you Michelle wantland..tonytocaa
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Michelle Wantland
Date: 4/27/2015 10:25:00 PM
Thank you for the compliments, they are very appreciated.

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