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Salty Spray

Salty spray upon the glass from the stormy sea The wind blows this way and that leaving its view obscuring salty residue Written around 5:30 on Friday before packing to come home..

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Joy Wellington

Date: 9/17/2012 5:13:00 PM

A lovely one Sara and multiple ways to read it. Hope that trip was memorable for you. One love and thanks for always visiting and commenting. Joy Wells

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/16/2012 9:37:00 PM

Nice to see the last view so early in the morning after the storm. The sea is a surprising creature so powerful after the storm. But before the preditor. Hope the vacation was nice.

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/16/2012 1:42:00 PM

Hope you had a good time. This is a good write.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/16/2012 12:03:00 PM

I like what you've done with this write! It's extremely creative with it's form and approach to the subject matter! It seems like a longer Haiku in some ways, with the "salty residue" as the juxtaposition! Very creatively enduring my friend, quite special in the delightful feelings you get from the harmonious words you used to describe the beach house(or car)! I really enjoyed this wonderful poem that you have written for us! Great Work!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/16/2012 10:09:00 AM

enjoyed glad yall are home.