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Said the Usa

Said the U.S.A. We soaring on three set of wings Eagle! Our strength Dove! Our compassion Turkey! Our sustenance Tell us not to choose our demise Together we shall never fall Indeed we are the greatest of nations © A. Juman - The "said" poet 11/7/2015

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Danielle Fenske

Date: 11/24/2015 7:31:00 AM

I love this! Thank you for sharing and inspiring...

Marcy James

Date: 11/23/2015 8:34:00 AM

So empowering! And very creative set of words to go with it. <3. I like it :).

Marion Mwangi

Date: 11/20/2015 7:31:00 AM

three set wings eagle, dove, turkey its a great poem

Constance La France

Date: 11/12/2015 12:01:00 PM

AZ, this is just wonderful, I love it, a winner to me ~

A. Juman
Date: 11/12/2015 6:41:00 PM

Sorry Miss, my father in not allowed to publish poems or email anyone on this site. If he does I will have my uncle put him on one of the slowest tug in the fleet. Then he will only see land one day a week. It seem he don't like it at home any more.

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/9/2015 12:33:00 PM

Good piece of descriptive work here Zaladin.

A. Juman
Date: 11/9/2015 1:23:00 PM

Thanks muck Joe-- I really appreciate that Thanks a million

Lei Strauss

Date: 11/9/2015 4:02:00 AM

Take me to USA :) TFS

A. Juman
Date: 11/9/2015 4:20:00 AM

Thanks Lei-- Keep hope up one day the dream will find a way Thanks a million

Pete Yuhas

Date: 11/8/2015 7:13:00 PM

Very good write A. Zaladin , and thanks for writing on my post. Pete Yuhas

A. Juman
Date: 11/8/2015 7:32:00 PM

Thanks for your good words Pete I really appreciate that.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/8/2015 4:56:00 PM

Dear Zaladin Interesting write here my friend, well written, thanks for the invite glad to stop by any time, and again thanks for your review of my poems also, cheri

A. Juman
Date: 11/8/2015 5:40:00 PM

Cheri Oh Cheri I am indebted to you for reading all my works here Thank you 10 Million times my fair lady

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/8/2015 1:51:00 PM

Your concise poem is well-written, patriotic, and moving; I enjoyed it. Janice

A. Juman
Date: 11/8/2015 7:33:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words Janice I really do appreciate that

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/8/2015 11:59:00 AM

I like how you addressed the theme and used all three symbols to represent our great country. Great job, and all the best for the contest. Sandra

A. Juman
Date: 11/8/2015 12:05:00 PM

Well thank you but you know the contest says only one bird so that's a no no---but do come see me and I'll do the same

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/8/2015 11:21:00 AM

I like this! I like how you took each bird and linked it to America's attributes. Well done! Love, Kim

A. Juman
Date: 11/8/2015 11:54:00 AM

Thank you kim Really love that

Al Juman

Date: 11/8/2015 3:17:00 AM

I love this poem -A it is so simple yet it brings our values strong, compassionate, and number one food producer in the world you got a 10 + + + here

A. Juman
Date: 11/8/2015 11:54:00 AM

Thanks I really appreciate that

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/7/2015 6:28:00 PM

Very powerful poem about a strong nation. You've captured the spirit of America very well! Very nicely done. Always, Laura

A. Juman
Date: 11/7/2015 6:53:00 PM

Thank you Laura - I really appreciate that