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Sadness

…is when your heart is so heavy that you can’t feel it for the void where light should be

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/15/2016 3:45:00 PM

A 7 for your EXCELLENT winning one liner, Kai! Janice

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/16/2016 7:22:00 AM

Thank you Janice.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/14/2016 8:37:00 AM

I like the way your title and the line flow without forcing them.... The imagery is also good!! Congrats Kai, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/16/2016 7:22:00 AM

Thanks Teddy.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/13/2016 6:38:00 PM

Hi Kai, This is a good description of sadness.Congratulations on your 2nd place win. :-) Alexis

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/16/2016 7:22:00 AM

Thanks and many wishes, Kai

Lu Loo

Date: 10/13/2016 11:37:00 AM

sad but true Kai...congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/16/2016 7:23:00 AM

Thank you lulloo.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2016 11:04:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Kai - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/16/2016 7:23:00 AM

Thank you sunshine. Many wishes, Kai

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/12/2016 11:00:00 AM

Very true. Congrats on your win with this fine one liner, Kai.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/16/2016 7:25:00 AM

Thank you Afzal.

Tony Devers

Date: 10/12/2016 5:08:00 AM

Yet even in sadness there is beauty, as you have shown us here. Thank you

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/16/2016 7:24:00 AM

Thank you Tony. Many smiles and wishes, Kai

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/12/2016 4:54:00 AM

So poetically said ... a nice one liner ...

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/16/2016 7:23:00 AM

Thanks Probir.