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Saddle Up Them Deer!

Santa Claus has been unemployed all year On the dole watching TV drinking beer Ms. Claus was going berserk Its Christmas time you fat jerk Get off your duff and saddle up them deer Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 1 in Francine Roberts "Christmas" Contest - December 2010

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John Truitt

Date: 2/2/2011 8:32:00 AM

Robert Hinshaw's poetry sings, and it's his work that caused me to join.

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/5/2011 9:58:00 AM

Hi Robert. No wonder this won. You still ride the range, albeit with reindeer. Good one. Eamon

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/10/2010 9:32:00 AM

ah huh!!! Thanks for the laugh Bob! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:03:00 PM

LOVED IT!! Congatulations, Robert!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/6/2010 3:40:00 PM

Great one Robert. Congratulations on your no. 1 with this one. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2010 11:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's first contest Bob. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 12/6/2010 5:01:00 AM

Congrats on your great win, Bob. Excellent. Well deserved. Ralphie

Leon Wilson

Date: 12/6/2010 3:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your 1st place win. God Bless. Leon

Noel Villarosa

Date: 12/5/2010 10:53:00 PM

Well done, Robert, congratulations on your big win for this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2010 3:31:00 PM

Good one..I understand Mrs. Claus..Congratulations on your win..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/5/2010 5:05:00 AM

Congrats Bob in your 1st place win in Francine's first contest... well done

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/5/2010 4:33:00 AM

Congrats Bob on your first place win in Francine's contest my friend.. a delightful entry ..bravo ..with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/4/2010 4:27:00 PM

Big congratulations on taking the top spot, Bob! Great write! Love, Carolyn

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/4/2010 4:17:00 PM

Surfing and I found this winner of yours Rob.. a hearty congrats to you ..you look good as #1 !!

John Freeman

Date: 12/4/2010 3:55:00 PM

Charming poem My Friend. Congratulations on your first place honor. Agape, Moses

Constance La France

Date: 12/4/2010 3:52:00 PM

Congratulations on first place, Robert, with this wonderful Christmas poem~~

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/4/2010 3:39:00 PM

Hooray for you and this funny poem, Robert!! A great 1st place entry!! :) Congratulations!!

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/4/2010 2:37:00 PM

every time I read it I laughed out loud, congrats on your first place win in my contest Bob, I appreciate the support

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2010 11:44:00 AM

I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day Bob. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/2/2010 11:00:00 AM

Hey Bob, I absolutely enjoyed your witty limerick tonight, thank you for your comment on my Tanka.. Wishing you and your family a blessed Christmas ;)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/2/2010 9:44:00 AM

Santa may be in for a surprise, Bob! Unemployment benefits extensions haven't been approved by Congress, so he best saddle up them deer. A very witty entry for Francine's contest and you know I always hope to see your poems in the winners' circle. Wishing you success (even if you're leaving us behind to take that cruise -- the green-eyed monster rears her ugly head). Love, Carolyn

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/2/2010 9:27:00 AM

lol, loved the humor here. I wish you and your family a Merry Christmas and Happy Holiday, too:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2010 5:12:00 AM

Unique humor on the unemployed Santa, Bob

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2010 10:11:00 PM

AWESOME, a sure bet to win!!

Diane Locksley

Date: 12/1/2010 4:24:00 PM

That's funny, Bob!! Good luck in Francine's contest. Hope her first contest is a big success and you have a very good entry. Thanks for stopping by.