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Sadder, But Wiser

Caught up in your words of sincerity Closest of friends, we shared from our hearts Twisting the truth was your reality. A wounded soul, you craved security I wanted to help you, to do my part Caught up in your words of sincerity. You shared past hurts, had a sad history It was important to make a fresh start Twisting the truth was your reality. Naive, I bared my soul too easily But you had a manipulative heart Caught up in your words of sincerity. In time, I found out you had lied to me You took what you needed, as I fell apart Twisting the truth was your reality. The sorrow remains, as I take my leave A life lesson learned, at least on my part Caught up in your words of sincerity Twisting the truth was your reality. Written on 3/20/2015

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Date: 7/20/2016 7:04:00 PM
Great villanelle, Laura! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/20/2016 8:52:00 PM
Thanks, Kim! Good to hear from you :)
Date: 7/16/2016 4:39:00 PM
A truly lovely villanelle, albeit sad, Laura. Congratulations on your podium finish! Regards // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/20/2016 8:51:00 PM
Thanks, Paul!Too bad it is based on a real friendship that went sour...
Date: 7/16/2016 2:15:00 PM
Laura, such a sad villanelle lady...you hold a true gift here with a wonderful flow...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/16/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement in your contest, Laura! I appreciate it:)
Date: 3/24/2015 4:32:00 PM
Such a wonderfully-written Villanelle, Laura, that expresses your sad emotions in being so let down. "Sadder But Wiser," your words surely expressed that so well. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/21/2015 1:06:00 AM
It's so sad when we're betrayed by someone we care about, but it can be a life lesson...a wonderfully expressive villanelle...best wishes in the contest...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:39:00 PM
Your magic filled the page picked me up and never let me down. Great work. Emile. #7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/20/2015 7:58:00 PM
Thanks, Emile, for your kind words :) I appreciate them!

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