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Sad Song -Tanka

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Sad Song -Tanka

"Marriage after Sunrise"

sunset drunken light
on lavender glass of wine
a long lost tear falls
converts into sleeping pills
dismiss the rain again

"Divorce before Sunset"

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  1. Date: 6/19/2014 9:35:00 AM
    Great tanka! It is beautifully written and captures so much emotion. Have a good day and God bless!

  1. Date: 5/6/2014 2:36:00 PM
    How beautiful! lost for words! // paul

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:55:00 PM
    It is a sad thing when our relationships seem like they only last from sunset to sunrise. A short time to love seems even shorter when love is nonexistent...A very deep, emotional poem which I loved to read! Sad poems are the only ones that seem real to me. Great work!...Thank you for the kind comments. They are very encouraging to me! :)

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 7:56:00 PM
    ''Sunset Drunken Light'', love that phrase my dear.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 2:15:00 AM
    Good morning Mistress. Just visiting to know how you and yours are doing? Have a great day. AO

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:23:00 AM
    A heartfelt write. Very emotional and unique. Well done PD. AO

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 11:17:00 AM
    Sad tale indeed, PD. Good imagery, emotion and contrast here.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:11:00 AM
    Awesome read. Betty

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 1:21:00 PM
    This poem shimmers, I love it.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 2:24:00 PM
    This was absolutely powerful and amazing. Sometimes circumstances in our life sadden us so much we just want to sleep it all away... I thought this poem was very cleverly written, very few words but it evoked a tone of emotions inside. I am loving your lines. Gottah read some more of yours. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 1:24:00 PM
    another of yours i have not seen yet,,, just love this,

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:41:00 PM
    The element of Time, haha, you can escape it. I guess many moons passed,as my native american ancestors would say, between these solar phenomena, but we always remember the details. It was a sunrise, and a sunset, the perfect summation of irony. Nice poem.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 1:37:00 AM
    This one is a great entry to the 2-in-1 contest and congrats for winning. The poem tells us that there are always two sides to a story. (^_^)

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:34:00 PM
    I like your words very much,,,,, though it is sad. thank you for reading my " Touch of Skin" I've enjoyed yr friendship Linda ;}

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 11:00:00 PM
    Short and sweet, married and divorced on the same day. Yea theres nothing much sweeter than sorrow. When are you gonna make another contest? Please do Linda I'll enter it. Well I challenge You.

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:43:00 PM
    very moving it is sad but yet a flow about it that still makes you smile I know I weird but it is the way I read it it is a bitter sweet poem thank you for sharing it on here I added you to my fave to so I can keep up with your wonderful writing your friend Nita

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 7:27:00 PM
    Wow.Made me feel.Made me imagine.Powerful

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 4:35:00 PM
    Wow! Talk about your short relationships. This is very good and thought provoking. Tears converting to sleeping pills what a great metophor.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:26:00 PM
    I really really like this. Enjoyed

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:02:00 PM
    Just got home We were at a party at the local bar for my nieces birthday. And she just got engaged. Good times. Why aren't u sleeping zzzzzzzzzzzz