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Sad Solstice - For Contest

Sad Solstice Brittle fields succumb to darkness Shadows creeping among learned stones Children cloaked in life’s mystery Await the return of the sun Shadows creeping among learned stones followed by the eyes of elders knowledge sifted through the ages gods and demons amid the clouds Children cloaked in life’s mystery humming wordless chants of promise dance on the frozen ground of hope embrace the lengthening shadows await the return of the sun feast on bleak future of darkness gnaw on the bones of such torment and worship these punishing gods 10/19/2015 submitted to – Shall We Retourne – Poetry Contest sponsor – Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 11/28/2015 8:34:00 AM
Shall We Retourne sounds like a tough one but you did it with this winner !!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/26/2015 8:02:00 PM
An interesting write, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/22/2015 9:26:00 AM
A message often felt but not often spoken of thank YOU! Conrad's and thanks for trying & brilliantly succeeding at a new form! Light & Love
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John Lawless
Date: 11/22/2015 3:22:00 PM
Appreciate the placement Debbie. The muse went a'wandering on this one...
Date: 11/21/2015 11:18:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your win. ...Love SKAT
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John Lawless
Date: 11/22/2015 3:20:00 PM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 10/19/2015 10:47:00 PM
Sun God please shine on us. We have been waiting so long for it's arrival. Mysterious write the masses waiting for their God to shine. Nice write like the clever wording.
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John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2015 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Michael, I went a bit far afield writing this one for the contest.

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