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Oh, she is quite frail now and very old, When she walks you can tell she is in pain; Loves a nap in the sun and hates the cold, Beautiful, I whisper- my tears like rain. Oh, please time stop clicking, I scream in vain, All she gives is unconditional love, Its hard to think of her dwelling above; She is an old cat and is my best friend, Oh, her death- sorrow hard to let go of. I held her to my heart until the end . . . . _________________________ May 15, 2016 Poetry/Dizain/"Sad Dizain" Copyright Protected, ID 16-790-683-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Sad Poem-Dizain sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 1/15/2017 8:16:00 AM
Very sad, but beautifully expressed dizain, BW. I agree w/Richard ... it's so hard to let go of a loved one. Such a tenderly written poem. Loved it though. Love and peace to you.
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Date: 7/12/2016 1:44:00 AM
Good looking poem .....skat
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Date: 5/25/2016 1:03:00 AM
excellent write my friend..!!! Congratulations too..:)))~Red
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Date: 5/21/2016 5:50:00 AM
It is hard to let go of and old friend. Congrats Constance.
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Date: 5/21/2016 2:38:00 AM
Congratulations Constance on your top spot:) A beautiful sad write:)
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Date: 5/21/2016 12:27:00 AM
Congrats, Broken, on a very sweet and sad poem well deserving the win. ~karam~
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Date: 5/20/2016 10:00:00 PM
Hauntingly beautiful. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/20/2016 7:08:00 PM
My goodness, that sorrowful pain of losing such a constant friend. Quite touching, congratulations!
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Date: 5/20/2016 3:57:00 PM
Love of your ailing pet. Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/20/2016 3:41:00 PM
Love for pets can be heartbreaking, congratulations BW!
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Date: 5/20/2016 3:15:00 PM
Oh, dear...this did bring a tear to my eyes, Broken Wings. So sad, but so wonderfully written. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/20/2016 3:09:00 PM
I know the sadness.... congrats on your placement.
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Date: 5/20/2016 2:43:00 PM
Awww how special! I love my animals and I know those feelings! Congrats on your top spot with this precious poem
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Date: 5/20/2016 2:34:00 PM
Beautifully drawn a poem with beautiful picture. A great congrats on your win. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 5/20/2016 1:15:00 PM
Broken Wings, a beautiful poem..sad yet beautiful...congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 5/17/2016 3:09:00 PM
I LOVE this one, Constance. You really captured the essence of this challenge. I know exactly this feeling, which I had for my dear Callie Cat.
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Date: 5/16/2016 10:04:00 AM
It is so tough to see a pet and a love one grow old. Relive the happy times.
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Date: 5/16/2016 10:07:00 AM
Tim, yes there were 18 years of unconditional love but that last day shattered me, thanks for visiting
Date: 5/15/2016 6:23:00 PM
Emotive and expressive work..It is sad to loose a pet..Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2016 9:20:00 PM
Sara, thanks so much for visiting ~
Date: 5/15/2016 12:37:00 PM
- Really painful, B.W. - Luck in contest (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:21:00 PM
Anne-Lise thanks for the compassion and the 7 ~
Date: 5/15/2016 8:23:00 AM
Well penned Constance, although sad it tells the emotions well, good stuff, blessings, Gordon
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:30:00 AM
Gordon, thanks for visiting and for the nice comment ...
Date: 5/15/2016 6:05:00 AM
Beautiful, Broken Wings, been there myself. Best wishes for the competition.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2016 9:32:00 AM
barry thanks for visiting, all pet owners know this pain
Date: 5/14/2016 11:39:00 PM
très triste très bon
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Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2016 9:34:00 AM
Etienne, thanks so much for visiting

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