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My so called "father" left me and my family when i was six weeks old how could he be so cold? He was never there when I needed him the most he acts like im a ghost I will never forget the stuff he has done he thinks its all just a game of fun And now that I have contacted him myself he doesnt even bother to ask about my health Hes never bothered Its like he wouldn't even care if I got smothered He does nothing but lie sometimes I wonder why I even try He has no interest in me I should just let go and let him be Other male adults are more of a father to me Atleast they don't flee Poem is about my "father" 12/14/2015 My name is Natasha For the contest, Poetry Writing #1, sponsor, Broken Wings

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Date: 12/14/2015 11:20:00 PM
Natasha, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/14/2015 2:45:00 PM
Hi Natasha, this is such a sad but excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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Date: 12/14/2015 11:38:00 AM
Natasha, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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