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Sacrificial Rite

Her Fate lies on a Predestined canvas Of muted red Darkness speaks truth Though gifts are silent Blindly, she feels for The magical key That will finally unlock His lonely chamber Her spirit is gentle Ready to disclose the one She has loved Forever… ’Drink the blood that patiently dripped from my heart into this Sacred Cask, and as you feel me rushing through your veins know…I love you’ Can he see beyond Time’s Regal cloak? Lift the veil of which separates logic and emotion? Sight and touch? She’s coming for him soon With the key to his Rebirth ‘Meet me at the Bottom of the Spiral Staircase’ The tears she sheds Belong to him… For him… Reaching Within the nucleus of an Isolated cell Love hurts that much A seemingly black abyss She descends Answering to the Dark Moon's Call Discovering The deepest place That eats away at her flesh... She’ll sacrifice her life For Him… If one moment His eyes see…

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/24/2014 4:15:00 PM

What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 3:19:00 AM

Tamiviolet, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/20/2011 6:59:00 AM

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Tamiviolet. Love and blessings, Carol

John Rhinem

Date: 9/15/2010 11:21:00 AM

Ps. Smile ~ I remember this precious soulful write, as if it were but yesterday when one awakens, from a dream ~ "Very Beautiful, Indeed!":) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 9/15/2010 11:18:00 AM

Smile ~ "Hello 'Beautiful TamiViolet Manchas'" ~ Just turning the leaves of the pages towards the olden times of when I first came here to The Soup dear &, thought about "You, 'Sooo Very Lovely'" ~ Maybe I should return to those I first met here; shake & bake...."Come Home; Let's Dance Again, 'Love Always,'" John! ~ Smile, "I Hope 'Your Beautiful Heart,' Has Been Doing So Very Beautifully; Truly;" Bye Dear Tami!:) ~

Donna Golden

Date: 10/11/2009 11:09:00 PM

Tamiviolet, this sounds like unrequieted love. Well written piece. Sincerely, Donna G

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/16/2009 2:46:00 PM

Tamiviolet, where are you hiding? Please come see us at PoetrySoup and bring me a poem to read. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 6:30:00 PM

Tamiviolet, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/28/2009 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals TamiViolet. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Ernesto P. Santiago

Date: 4/4/2009 1:19:00 PM

Hello Tamiviolet, congrats on your masterpiece surviving the first round...truly deserving to be in the finals, awesome! Cheers, Ernesto

Janetta Harrington

Date: 3/24/2009 3:59:00 PM

i was in the hospital this last year for a very long time and i died a very short time. i awakened with one thing i know. it is much harder to live than to die. janetta. your choice of words and your meter is without reproch. janetta

Donna Golden

Date: 12/31/2008 2:11:00 PM

Dark and deep; this is the kind of poem I love to read...and write! Worthy of reading many times. Donna G.

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/29/2008 10:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Warmest wishes for a safe and happy new year! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/29/2008 9:01:00 AM

Tamiviolet - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – I hope the coming year has many blessings in store for you and those you love – God Bless, MJ

Date: 12/28/2008 5:56:00 PM

There is a lot of depth to this poem. The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 12/28/2008 5:19:00 PM

Congratulations Tamiviolet on this dark poem being featured. Car 54 Where Are you? God Bless. Vince

Margaret Okubo

Date: 11/2/2008 12:27:00 PM

So extremely beautiful as usual.Reading it is living it. Excellent Tami. Hadn't heard from you in quite a while and only this morning I was thinking about you. Then a moment ago I was going through my old blogs and saw your name. So here I am. Lol. Margaret.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 9/15/2008 12:03:00 PM

I see you haven't lost your touch. Amazing write. God Bless. Vince

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 9/14/2008 9:24:00 PM

wellwellwell...the missing person report,must've fell on your writing desk and woke you up !!....good to see you gracing these pages with such fine verse....as always,delightful to read VIE :)....even in such a myserious write as this....peace , jay

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/14/2008 11:52:00 AM

Your writing has always been so perfect and beautiful - This one is so deeply beautiful in a dark way - I wrote a poem awhile back titled "The Ladies of Poetry Soup" and even though you were gone so long I kept both you and Lynn Marie in it because you are forever in my heart - I hope life has treated you well Tami - I pray for you often because you I could never forget - I'm in the process of starting back to collage - sure hope I get me a teacher as special as you - I doubt that though