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Sacrament City

Not long ago Say, about 300 years Two Indigenous tribes Nearly disappeared Others came From year to year Hunters, trappers And future peers John Sutter A Swiss guy This city became The place to try At Sutters Mill Gold was found In Coloma Now ghostly grounds But this place of new With its foundations down Pre 1849 It was just a town February 27th 1850 This town now Became a city In its gorgeous valleys With 2000 fruit tree's It's agriculture was born A taste to please To the modern world You should see it now High rise buildings A place so proud As we all remember From it's infant years Like every other named city Shared strife and tears The past has been As our future tells But a certain few Have to be remembered as well What these tribes left So little to show But a city grew Called Sacramento " For Barbara Gorelick " http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/america.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/6/2009 10:35:00 AM
Love the history throughtout James! Intriguing to say the least, you always know how to keep the ink flowing creativiely!
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Date: 7/5/2009 2:55:00 PM
Brabara will love this, James, as did I! The description of the history was so intriguing and I kept wondering exactly where it was as I was reading. Sacramento is a beautiful place and you described its past brilliantly. Outstanding poem! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 7/5/2009 1:43:00 PM
Great historical piece! You are a great writer.
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Date: 7/5/2009 12:54:00 PM
James, your sweetheart! You couldnt have written anything I would have enjoyed more. My son played the role of James Marshall who actually discovered gold at SuttersFort. its a wonderful spot and we got to spend the night at the fort. Nice except for the wail of ambulances from the hospital next door. sheesh. thank you so much, I love it and it will go in may personal favorites. BG
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Date: 7/5/2009 12:16:00 PM
Sacramento! Thanks for the America History lesson, James. Hey!!! I was born on Sacramento's birthday! Thank you for your comment on my poem, James.
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Date: 7/5/2009 9:24:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL,JUST BEAUTIFUL---CHARMA
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Date: 7/5/2009 8:38:00 AM
gorgeous tribute for Barbara! James!
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