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Rytalin and Amphetamines

It makes you feel, like your made of steel, the street name is literal, i'm uncontainable, but then at the end, with all you have spent, my head is spinning, but i'm still grinning, happy but dull, but why am i full, now i must smoke, and hope i dont croke, if i go to bed now, i will not say chow, but i must see it through, try and chug down some grool.

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Date: 10/12/2014 11:48:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Lawrence - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/11/2014 12:01:00 AM
Like your made of steel,very pretty line.
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