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Running Down the Driveway

RUNNING DOWN THE DRIVEWAY Three running down the driveway in delight Or two racing around in one baby walker near the fence Or one practising the piano at night : They were the end reason for my privileged existence. In the garden planting and sheltering flowers from the hot sun, And the struggle with the tree in the wind, with ropes securing it, And her reading lessons from school made bright with fun, And the two boys making a soft place for the cat to sit - Outshine all the places I’ve been, people I’ve known. Successes I’ve had: they are nothing. All the achieving: Absolutely nothing. Compared with the memory of those three - now grown - Running down the driveway when I came home in the evening. And how they started to look like their parents, girl or boy, In such sparkling and unpredictable ways Churns up my soul with feelings of thanks and joy, Against which brightness all else dims throughout my days. Being their father is the greatest privilege, for which I would gladly pay. At the end I will wish for nothing except the pleasure to be Once again there and see them running down the driveway Laughing, shouting, flinging six arms around me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/21/2013 7:38:00 PM
This is so beautiful and full of feeling and meaning. I love it!! Congrats
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Date: 6/21/2013 6:19:00 PM
Sidney I truly enjoyed this wonderful poem. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/21/2013 5:38:00 PM
This one, just warms my heart with love tucked between the lines in such a heartwarming, yet subtle way. I love this poem!!
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Date: 6/21/2013 12:58:00 PM
I am beyond glad to see you back on soup please DO email me [& T also since I LOST your emails!] Congrad's on Your WIN!
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Date: 11/19/2011 7:27:00 AM
wow,Sydney, this is so touching. It reminds me of that country song. From my front porch or something like that. Do you know the one I mean? the man is singing about the joy of his little ones. I was rereading old comments to old posts and saw your comments there to me and realized that all along your name was Beck and for some reason my mind only registered it the other way, so I'm sorry I got confused on that. Glad you liked my reference to the bird "becking" at your nose. hahaha. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/18/2011 1:11:00 PM
I know Sydney, I know. My Father-in-law has Alzheimer's and sometimes he will talk to us like it was 25 years ago and through his eyes I see my two kids as little kids ont he beach at the lake again. I miss it too. Tony
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