Home » Poems » Iolanda Scripca » Ruins In Sandcastles

Ruins In Sandcastles

Scared to fall asleep As tides rip open shelters Of childhood castles... Scared to lower bridge As hopeful heart cries exposed Under jogger's shoe... Ephemeral life Whales eco-locate my soul Tacit castles in the dusk... for SKAT's Contest "Sand Castles"

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Iolanda in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:53:00 PM

a GREAT trio there, Iolanda and well deserved win. Congratulations!

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 5:36:00 PM

Congrats on your win.I liked this one very much-kashinath

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:20:00 AM

Congratulations Iolanda on your 5th place, You go girl! Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 4:28:00 AM

I love this one!!!! images are excellent...congrats my poet friend...love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:13:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Iolanda

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:31:00 PM

Iolanda~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/5/2010 8:36:00 PM

Nice one Iolanda. Many congrats for this win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2010 5:20:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this great work..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/5/2010 5:11:00 PM

Well done, and good luck in the contest,..p.d.