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Rude, Drunken Pen

Bloody rude drunken pen has enjoyed a nib of ink or two, reminiscing on a few Bad and ugly times, we both admit at times things were, a bit of a mess, All kinds of intertwined, confused but along the way making some progress On the grand masterpiece of all masterpieces – writing bliss At first polite, we take in turns, to interject with collaborative words, Until the air hits us hard, take a breath, where’s your etiquette, manners and respect, My turn pen, I command, continue on to write, scribbling like an erratic bird’s nest. Pen resists and spits its ink, a dirty blob from its nib…how rude All smudged and slurred is a dribbling rambling of everything crude Across the page leaking its ink, clearly from excessive drink Dancing on thin ice, my drunken pen decides to try and entice Inviting me to envelope, his muscular body with smooth fingers Such fraternisation you drunken sleaze, how do you expect to please The love of your life, giving you permission to write and express your ink with ease Drunken pen is at a loss as reflects on his drunken state, its very late Blubbering relaxed words across the page, deep within and obscure Then I realise that my drunken pen is sometimes a little insecure He has a way of making me melt when I think of his 50 shades of blue Each drink of ink that fills his nib, that prints our words, that stains my skin Is in every way the partnership of creative bliss and my perfect hue 2nd October 2012 Written for Drunken Pen - Part 2 Contest

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Date: 2/13/2013 5:53:00 PM
However did I miss this one? I am intoxicated by your words, a very satisfying drink! To my favorites.
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Date: 12/1/2012 12:37:00 AM
That is awesome! Congrats on your win.. :o)
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Date: 10/20/2012 12:17:00 PM
A grin escaped my face when I read this one. great win Shaz, congrats! One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 10/19/2012 9:24:00 PM
shaz, congratulations with your awesome win in the "Drunken Pen Round 2 " contest.....love the way you hold your pen. good night :-) xox PD
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Date: 10/19/2012 7:41:00 AM
congrats on a great win Shaz
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/19/2012 6:51:00 PM
sorry 'Like' entering contests hehe
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/19/2012 6:50:00 PM
Hey Thanks Joseph.....I think I live entering contests - Shaz
Date: 10/19/2012 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Drunken Pen" contest Shaz. Love, Carol
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/19/2012 6:52:00 PM
Hi Carol - thanku very much :) I was surprised to be on the list, but glad to be there - Shaz
Date: 10/19/2012 12:56:00 AM
very cute
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/19/2012 6:52:00 PM
Hi Ruth - thanku - Shaz
Date: 10/17/2012 12:57:00 AM
This pen is a drunken master and I aint talkin Jackie Chan this is BANGIN!!!!
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/19/2012 6:53:00 PM
LOL - cheers Sha'ntez
Date: 10/6/2012 7:52:00 AM
oh wow I LOVE this! the imagery and the flow of words, its pure magic!
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/6/2012 8:08:00 AM
Oh wow...thank you Germaine! lovely to get your thoughts - :D
Date: 10/4/2012 8:06:00 AM
Sometimes at nite I'm in that mood. And my pen too is a little crude. But the next day I see the mistakes I made and correct my errors for a perfect grade.
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/4/2012 7:58:00 PM
hehe.....oh yes. Like your reply John :)
Date: 10/3/2012 4:30:00 PM
yes i do like you 50 shades of blue ink offering...
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/4/2012 7:58:00 PM
Hehehe.......good old 50 shades hey. Blue is a nice change lol - thanks Don :)
Date: 10/2/2012 10:49:00 PM
bravo Shaz loved it,great write girl,good luck for the contest
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 10/4/2012 7:57:00 PM
Hey thanks Richard...it's all over the place in a way...but I guess thats what a drunken pen might do lol - Shaz

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