Rosie

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Yo listen up babe Had an ache in my head So I swallowed a Bayer Had a slight fever So I took a chill pill Had my eyes set on you And your façade So I call on sir Cupid To help me along With some love potion Number ..69 Everything was Rosie So I thought Rosie this Rosie that Best I ever had She was so fine We danced we wind And dined Till the early morning light It is written it is said We kissed And off we went to bed A dream came to me Turned into a nightmare Oh God I'm Hiv.. All rights reserved A.camacho jr. 1996-2015

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Daisy Marie Yant

Date: 10/28/2016 1:36:00 PM

Tony T. I am just now reading this. This is good. Everything ain't as Rosie as it should be. Much Love....a year or so later.

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 10/28/2016 3:59:00 PM

thanks miss Daisy,peace n love goin ur way..tonytocaa

Cynthia Jones

Date: 4/6/2015 3:19:00 PM

Great write Tony. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. A 7 from me. *S* Cynthia

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 5/17/2020 12:04:00 PM

Thanks cynthia,peace to you hugs and stay safe ..tonytocaa

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/2/2015 12:00:00 PM

lol...I believe you know the moral of the story...good write...Kim :)

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 4/2/2015 12:48:00 PM

Hey Kim I think you're a dreamer and a believer like myself that's what we have in common thanks for all your support today love and peace Tony

Neva Romaine

Date: 1/30/2015 10:06:00 AM

Hey Tony, a great expression of the meaning of "just say no to lust". Great writing. Neva

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 1/30/2015 12:17:00 PM

Hi Neva ,thank you ..means a lot to me..moderation is the key ..??