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Ronin 10

There is a brotherhood among soldiers a bond a band a fellowship that those at battle’s end speak of I long for its connection, its embrace Yet here you lay blood bubbling from your lips as you try to speak to me Beg me for comfort in your final setting sun My hand cannot stop the rose petals that burst from your body with each failing breath. In our eyes we both know the outcome But in my heart my secret my truth I hate the burden you have left the living

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Date: 4/8/2011 5:01:00 AM
you've either been there, or you've got right into the mindset, hope it's the latter, nice emotionally charged piece.
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