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silvery grey moon kisses the shimmering lake romance fills the air Moon Spoon Contest Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann 12~18~16

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John Fleming

Date: 1/6/2017 9:30:00 AM

This is actually very, very good! If I was judging the contest this would take some beating...Impressed, Jan. All the very best for your New Year - Cheers! :) john

Jan Allison
Date: 1/6/2017 1:58:00 PM

I wish you'd been judging I got an N/A lol yet another for my ever growing collection:-) hugs jan xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/5/2017 11:32:00 AM

Great imagery and romantic thought.A7

Jan Allison
Date: 1/6/2017 1:57:00 PM

Thanks Robert:-) hugs jan xx

J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/25/2016 6:09:00 AM

:) Marvelous and insightful poem with passion throughout

Jan Allison
Date: 12/25/2016 6:11:00 AM

Thanks so much David:-) Hope you have a wonderful time over the festive period:-) hugs Jan xx

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/23/2016 5:22:00 AM

Romance fills my heart too. Beautiful.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thanks so much Newton:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/22/2016 5:08:00 AM

Aww! This is so sweet, Jan:) love the picture you have chosen too:)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 2:28:00 PM

Thanks so much Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/21/2016 7:26:00 AM

How beautifully romantic! A seven dear, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2016 7:00:00 PM

Thanks Demetrios so lovely to see you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2016 12:42:00 PM

Oooooo JAN, who I miss a whole poetic bunch. This is a nice delight to read. I like your approach of a simple topic for a haiku (your haiku) Rich with Imagery. A perfect 7. I can sleep to the imagery and hope I don't drown in the reflection. Love LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 12/20/2016 4:40:00 PM

aww thanks Linda I am amazed at how far I have come in less than 3 years:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Hauser

Date: 12/20/2016 7:49:00 AM

Love it!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/20/2016 10:38:00 AM

Think I'll send it off to haiku journal see what they think:-) hugs janxx

David Meade

Date: 12/19/2016 1:04:00 PM

Moon kisses . . . love that image!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 6:56:00 PM

aww thanks David - I still drop by to read your poem that I LOVE so much whenever I see your avatar I am reminded of what a fabulous poem it is:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/19/2016 11:15:00 AM

Hi Jan, This is sooo romantic. Nice imagery as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 6:57:00 PM

Thanks Alexis I don't do much slushy stuff lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 12/19/2016 10:26:00 AM

Moon spoons the lake :) Wonderful.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 6:57:00 PM

aww thanks:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 12/19/2016 10:00:00 AM

Very sweet Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 6:57:00 PM

Thanks Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 12/19/2016 9:18:00 AM

Beautiful Jan, you have capture the enchantment of the moon and romance wonderfully

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 6:58:00 PM

Your romantic poems must be rubbing off on me Chris!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 12/19/2016 7:51:00 AM

This is one of the best Haiku that I've read brilliant Jan, good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 6:59:00 PM

aww thanks for the lovely comment Roy:-) I never know if I have written a proper haiku:-) hugs Jan xx

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/19/2016 4:37:00 AM

Beautiful imagery...A big 7... Good luck with the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 6:59:00 PM

Thanks Supraja:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/19/2016 4:08:00 AM

- Lovely and romantic ... in the moonlight - Good luck in the contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 6:59:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/19/2016 3:34:00 AM

La Luna, l'amore! A beautiful romantic piece from you Jan! I loved it! : ) 7

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 7:00:00 PM

Thanks so much for your lovely comment Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/18/2016 10:16:00 PM

Ohhhhh, now I just need to be kissed! Ew la la, Jan ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 7:01:00 PM

aww Thanks so much CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/18/2016 8:54:00 PM

Love to read a romantic piece from you. Kisses....yes....nature also breathes of romance. Hugs, my dear Queen of Humor!!! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 7:02:00 PM

They are few and far between Eileen - you are the Queen of passion:-) hugs jan xx

White Wolf

Date: 12/18/2016 8:13:00 PM

As a confirmed lunatic... I love all moon poems! And this was no exception! A great haiku, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 7:03:00 PM

ha ha ha I like your type of lunartic's Rick lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/18/2016 8:06:00 PM

If ever a poem and a photo belonged together, this is it! A Marriage made in heaven, or at least the moon!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2016 7:03:00 PM

aww thanks what a lovely comment Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2016 7:16:00 PM

lovely, Jan, and the picture too.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2016 7:24:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/18/2016 4:13:00 PM

A huge moon with a heart! Nice, Jan! Good luck in contest! Hugs, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2016 4:19:00 PM

Thanks Kim its a lovely subject to write about for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/18/2016 3:56:00 PM

This is so good, Jan, good luck in the contest. Congratulate your son for me... Hugs and Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2016 3:58:00 PM

Thanks Eve I am still on cloud 9:-) He is encouraging me to get my funny poems published and I will achieve this next year to make HIM proud of me and to say ' I did it':-) YOU inspire me my friend!!!:-) hugs jan xx