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Romance At the Fair

Pink cotton candy memories come dancing on the autumn breeze. Every worry flees as I ride starlight on the "Big Wheel", glancing upon my waiting world, small in hindsight. Bees buzz and birds swoon, a taste of moonlit kisses. At the county fair, romantic dreams were his. Now, a brown Teddy bear won for me does remain. Sweet beginnings of our love, never to wane.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/27/2012 5:55:00 PM
Fairs are very romantic! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/26/2012 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Lisa's "Unnamed County Fair"contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/24/2012 11:24:00 PM
Hmm!how romantic. Wonderful and beautiful piece,Rhonda. Great job...Congratulations on your super win...
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Date: 7/24/2012 12:03:00 PM
how delicately scribed, rhonda... congrats on your splendid win!..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/23/2012 12:04:00 PM
Congradulations On Your Well Deserved Win! Such a sweet poem! Jane XoXo
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Date: 7/23/2012 9:08:00 AM
A sweet romantic poem. Great writing. Congratulations on the win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/23/2012 4:56:00 AM
a lovely poem! congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/23/2012 3:20:00 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win, love it..you are on a roll..David
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Date: 7/20/2012 3:35:00 PM
What glorious and happy moments described within this harmonious write! I just loved reading this extremely beautiful poem my friend! This poem brought peace and love to my heart! Great Work!!
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