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Rolling Thunder and a Gentle Rain

The gentle music flows from every drop of rain, as it just lightly taps against my window pane. The wind begins to whistle it's own melodious song, while the wind-chimes dance and play along. The soothing sounds cast open the windows and doors. I close my eyes and breathe. The energy surrounds me as my spirit soars. I hold out my hand and feel the raindrops as if they were at play. My breath now quickened with emotion. I taste the rain on my lips as I embrace the glorious day. The curtains blow inward the breeze itself is warm, my mind is so peaceful in the calm before the storm. The sky's voice trembles from above a darkening cloud, as the rolling thunder speaks it's thoughts aloud. The thunder awakens the flash of light. The part of nature that sends some to flight. I chose to embrace the power of nature in the earth and sky. And bask in the wonder that fills my eyes. The rain seems to be letting up as it puddles on the green grass, and the once powerful winds are now calming down at last. The gray clouds are parting and a bright rainbow forms, proving that something beautiful can come from such dangerous storms. My eyes close and I breathe in the scent of the cleansing rain. The brilliant hues of the rainbow dance in my mind where I feel no pain. The sun peaks from behind the clouds just to say hi. I feel the warmth against my face as I view the beauty with a sigh. Written by: Kelly Deschler & Nature Boy For Jared Pickett's contest - "Collaboration"

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Date: 10/18/2017 3:49:00 AM
The rolling thunder is our passion, and the gentle drizzle is our soul. This poem is fresh and lively,which brings us into the fairyland of human beings.we all revel in it for a long time. The unique lyricism brings us amazing spiritual enjoyment. Salute to you,my dear friend!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/19/2017 2:56:00 PM
I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem! Thank you so much for your kind comments, both Gregory and I appreciate them very much :)
Date: 8/27/2016 11:40:00 PM
What a delight to have found this poem. Well actually you found me first. Two things that struck me is 1 the beautiful melodic title 2 the easy flow and gentle rhythm. Congràtulations on your win. Wow ! Your poem was read by almost 5000 people ! I will be sure to read some others
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/16/2016 5:37:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly, Jannie. I appreciate that very much :)
Date: 11/30/2015 12:26:00 PM
Thank you for this poem! I used it for a nature journaling class with primary school age children. One little girl said that the poem "made her feel invincible".
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/27/2015 9:13:00 PM
You're welcome, Michelle, and thank you so much for your kind comments. I really was touched by them... I am so glad your class enjoyed this poem! :)
Date: 12/29/2014 12:13:00 PM
Great Collaboration, Great choice for Best 2014 poem. Congratulations on your win Kelly.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/1/2015 1:08:00 AM
We do appreciate the kind congrats, Brenda. Thank you so much!
Date: 12/26/2014 10:27:00 PM
Kelly, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
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Date: 12/19/2014 5:53:00 AM
Wow Kelly that's so lovely, great collaboration my friend!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/24/2014 1:15:00 AM
We really do appreciate your nice comments, Dr. Upma. Thank you so much, my friend!
Date: 12/18/2014 7:35:00 AM
Beautifully written Kelly...From storm to rainbow beauty flows...Congrats on your win...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/23/2014 1:47:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comments, Joseph... It was a wonderful experience to collaborate with Nature Boy on this poem. We're happy that you've enjoyed reading it!
Date: 12/18/2014 5:10:00 AM
Very soothing and soft write nicely penned, congratulations on the win, kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/23/2014 1:25:00 AM
This poem was just a joy to write. Nature Boy is so kind and so easy to collaborate with... We do appreciate your kind congrats and comments. Thank you so much, Dr. Ram!
Date: 12/17/2014 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/17/2014 3:46:00 PM
I love this Kelly, I am happy this contest gave me a chance to read it. A Fav!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/23/2014 1:05:00 AM
I am glad you had the chance to read our poem, too. It is nice to know that you've enjoyed it! Thank you very much for the kind congrats, Maurice!
Date: 12/17/2014 1:23:00 PM
such a beautiful flow to the poem many congrats to you both:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/23/2014 1:07:00 AM
Yes, I agree. I wish that he would write more often...
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2014 4:34:00 AM
I have read some of his works his poems are so beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/21/2014 1:04:00 AM
It was nothing but a joy writing this poem with Nature Boy. He has a great talent for poetry... We appreciate your kind words, Jan. Thank you very much!
Date: 5/29/2014 12:31:00 PM
This poem has a ambiance so soft and gentle about it .. It is strange how words only can create a place and atmosphere without being there physically. Well done!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/31/2014 10:07:00 PM
Thank you, once again. I really appreciate your nice comments, Regina!.... This collaboration was a joy to write, because my writing partner was so kind and he made me feel so at ease. I think that calm feeling really came through in our poem.
Date: 4/16/2014 5:24:00 AM
congratulations to you both on this wonderful collab xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/18/2014 12:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, Mandy. We really do appreciate your kind comments. :)
Date: 4/15/2014 4:51:00 PM
Congrad's on your collaboration winning. Light & Love
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Date: 4/15/2014 12:52:00 PM
this is a tender , lyrical write.. sweet congrats, kelly and nature boy.. huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/16/2014 1:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Nette. We do appreciate your kindness! Hugs :)
Date: 4/15/2014 12:45:00 PM
Beautifully collaborated Kelly and Nature... Congratulations on winning in the contest... Verlena
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/16/2014 1:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Verlena. We do appreciate your kind comments! :)
Date: 4/15/2014 10:38:00 AM
Brilliantly collaborated poem. Congrats on the win, kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/16/2014 1:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dr. Ram. We appreciate your kind comments! :)
Date: 4/15/2014 10:11:00 AM
Congrats to you Kelly and tour collaborator Nature Boy. Much enjoyed poem...so easy flowing...like the gentle rain. // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/16/2014 12:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paul! I do appreciate your kind visit. :)
Date: 4/15/2014 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations both ...Seren
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/16/2014 12:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Seren! :)
Date: 3/25/2014 4:14:00 PM
hey, finally saw the reply you made to my comment. Usually I don't ever see those. Anyway, I really like that your made all your verses pretty much equal in their line length. Especially in your first four verses that were yours. Very flowing.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/26/2014 5:34:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! It is always a challenge to keep the line lengths the same. But, I do like the look of a poem when the lines are of equal length....I always wonder if I should be replying to the comments on my poems. I don't know if people enjoy that or if it is annoying to receive them? :)
Date: 3/22/2014 8:51:00 AM
Hi Kelly, You painted a masterpiece in my mind's eye. This is worth reading over and over again. Well done. Regards Theresa xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/24/2014 7:41:00 PM
Hi Theresa, Thank you very, very much! I'm really happy that you enjoyed this poem. :)
Date: 3/22/2014 7:30:00 AM
- Nice to read your "Latest Poem" in the contest sponsored by: Leonora Galinta :) - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN,KELLY ! - Will also wish you an enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/24/2014 7:25:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne Lise! I do appreciate your kind visit. :)
Date: 3/22/2014 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win for your latest poem, kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/24/2014 7:17:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comments, Dr. Ram!
Date: 3/22/2014 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this great write and win my dear friend Kelly. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your precious gem. Thank u so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest. Big warm hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/24/2014 7:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Leonora! I'm really happy that you enjoyed this poem. Warm hugs! :)
Date: 3/19/2014 10:34:00 AM
what a melodious piece cascading like rain!.. a wonderful collab, kelly.. thank you for a slot in your heart and soul contest; really honored!.. huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/19/2014 7:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette! I'm so happy that you enjoyed our collaboration!...You're welcome, I really enjoyed your poem. Thanks for entering my contest! Hugs :)
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