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Rolling Bottle

missing you here by my side, having you there in her eyes. it just doesn't help me here, and I feel I have lied. gave you a perception, that wasn't too clear. and now thats an empty bottle, it's rolling down the stairs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/12/2012 2:31:00 PM
Interesting write. I wonder how many different interpretations of your poem you will be able to get from others on this site.
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Date: 7/12/2012 3:46:00 PM
thank you Robert, I meant it as to refer to a past or ending love being as empty as the bottle when it reaches to stair bottom.
Date: 6/30/2012 1:22:00 AM
ruth, I really love this short and simple poem that is not so simple in its meaning! Great job with this.
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Date: 7/11/2012 8:06:00 PM
some times love is just an empty bottle rolling down the stairs
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Courtney Courtney
Date: 6/30/2012 7:52:00 PM
thank you Andrea, short but sweet.

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