Rodeos

Rhoda rode rodeos at Countless County Fairs Parents partners and children Schemed screeched screamed

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Skat A

Date: 8/16/2015 1:14:00 AM

Annalise, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **SKAT**

Daver Austin

Date: 8/13/2015 3:29:00 PM

Eeeeeeeee Hah, Annalise. Congrat on the selection. Love, daver

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/19/2009 6:47:00 AM

Fine allitereation! Do you live out west? I went to a friend's place in Colorado a couple of years ago and saw a rodeo for the first time. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2009 4:25:00 PM

Nicely done alliterations. Keep writing. Sara

Elaine George

Date: 11/8/2009 1:31:00 PM

PERFECT DESCRIPTIVE AND DELIGHTFUL ALLITERATION, AUDREY. THANK YOU FOR SHARING, AND THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND COMMENTS. LOVE, LAINIE.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/8/2009 4:31:00 AM

Very nice alliteration, Audrey. I am happy to say that I have been to a rodeo and your last line captures the excitement very well! I'm impressed. Lovingly, Dane Ann Soupmail

Milton Toran

Date: 11/7/2009 8:28:00 AM

Sharp, very sharp!! I'm gonna have to take a "stab" at this poetic form. It seems challenging. ( I like a bit of challenge ) Thanks for the comments on my works. I briefly "skimmed" through some of your poetry and I feel that you're going to be one of my favorites! As soon as time allows, I promise I'll be commenting on more of your works. I'm an intern at school and I'm running all the time. God bless you! Milt

John Freeman

Date: 11/6/2009 11:20:00 AM

A masterful Alliteration, Audrey. I use to enjoy rodeos, but not much in the last few years. Good Job girl. Sincerely, Love Moses

Marty Owens

Date: 11/5/2009 9:25:00 PM

Nice Alliteration....enjoyed...Marty