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Below is the poem entitled "Rocks" which was written by poet bill frew. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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My heart is a rock, it cannot be broken;
It's layered in sorrow from the words I've spoken-
My tears are like ice: they harden while falling,
Pouring down pain and grief of my causing-
My soul is an alley, so dark and desolate;
Strewn by the winds of hate and neglect-

If we happen to meet and I give you my heart,
Please chisel a layer and bust it apart-
Look past the tears my eyes have been crying
And guide me to sunshine, so I'm able to dry them-
If my spirit seems lost in fear and despair:
Words may revive me, if spoke true in my ear.

Copyright © bill frew

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  1. Date: 4/15/2010 9:27:00 PM
    that was really good, enjoyed it a lot

  1. Date: 4/15/2010 9:04:00 PM
    Very ineresting expressions. I enjoyed it

  1. Date: 4/15/2010 6:14:00 PM
    My heart is jello soaking up the love.

  1. Date: 4/15/2010 4:12:00 PM
    Very interesting read- I can almost see you looking out the window of the nineteenth floor