Rocked Bees Around the Clock

Rocked Bees, Rocked Bees, Rocked around the clock, The Queen to sleep, Bees waked up, Rocked all minds up- To give the tiring work up, Walked over the hive,Bees, Making flowers a might, For their freedom fight!

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Skat A

Date: 2/16/2015 12:04:00 AM

Muhammad, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 2/22/2015 7:45:00 PM

God bless you.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/14/2015 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, I don't like the bee's in flight they like to bite. Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Eve

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 2/22/2015 7:46:00 PM

Thank you dear poet Roper.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2015 2:33:00 PM

Very clever write - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 2/24/2015 3:02:00 AM

Thank you dear poet Allison.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/10/2014 2:22:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Tfs

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 2/24/2015 3:03:00 AM

Thank you dear poet Ravi.

Dan Helppi

Date: 12/9/2014 9:54:00 PM

Very nice!

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 2/24/2015 3:04:00 AM

Thank you dear poet Dan.