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R-iding in a fast and coolest BMW,
O-verwhelmed by the fantastic view,
A-nother experience to be with nature,
D-azzling scenery, greenest earth so pure,

T-rip with a great mission in reality,
R-oads are smoothest away from the city,
I-nteresting discovery as we travel along,
P-eople are awesome as my companion. 

August 24, 2013
7th Place Winner
For Kim Merryman's "Road Trip" Contest

Copyright © Maria Paz Samelo

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  1. Date: 12/31/2013 4:14:00 PM
    Happy New Year my friend Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 7:54:00 AM
    Maria, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:30:00 PM
    a lovely trip described here. I love that car you are in!! congrats

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:50:00 AM
    congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:01:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 7:53:00 AM
    Hi Maria, this is a wonderful winning poem... Linda

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:08:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 8:57:00 PM
    Maria, thank you for supporting my contest and congrats on your win! Good work! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 6:34:00 PM
    Hi Maria, this sounds like a grand trip. Please take me along next time. Very nice my friend.

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 1:08:00 AM
    GREAT WRK enjoyed it do visit my wrk smtyms ~V~

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 6:49:00 AM
    Excellent. Sound as great trip. Well penned. ENjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 9:07:00 AM
    Good evening my dear friend Maria! *I'm extremely happy to read a new & outstanding poem again from you. While reading this, i feel like going to travel again :) thank you so much for sharing. This is a winner for me. Belated congrats for your wins as well. I'm so sorry if i come only now. Hope you're doing well. (me? mai sabai naka loko mi panha). Well, but I know God loves us. Thank you so much for your great writes & everything! Big sweet hugs! Tcare! love much, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 4:28:00 AM
    ............ SO NICE ..TRIP........$@#%#@

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:55:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 8:32:00 PM
    very nice, Maria. Put an -ed on the word "overwhelmed"!!

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/24/2013 2:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    many thanks friend Andrea, actually I wrote it with ed on my notebook but when I typed and posted it here I didn't put it...(^_____^) Have a nice weekend. hugs
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 11:19:00 AM
    - Sounded like a "cool girl trip" ... Well done, you are talented! - Wishing you a beautiful weekend, Maria .... relax! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)