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Risen From the Mud

A tribute to Sri Lanka Gold medalist Susanthika A Lotus bud was hidden in the mud of a jungle stream Dark skin, curly hair Black mare runs Against the wind Across the fields On the rocks In the jungle Barefoot Barefoot Thorns prick her little feet No cry, No sighs Bones protruding scar face, Rewards of starvation Her childhood Had to run miles to school Barefoot Barefoot She rose from the mud To the national games No spikes, no sandals Barefoot Barefoot Our black mare Ran across the Oceans To Sydney Olympics Like an arrow, against the wind Rose for the nation in the contest Girl Rising

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/9/2013 11:32:00 AM
I am honored to read your beautiful and awe inspiring poem... this gave me spectacular goose bumps up and down my spine... Such awesome work
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Date: 8/7/2013 6:43:00 PM
An inspiring woman & verse. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/7/2013 11:27:00 PM
Thank you Debbie
Date: 8/5/2013 7:36:00 PM
Way to go Manel, a well deserved win. Thanks for your entry.
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/5/2013 7:49:00 PM
Thank you dear Richard. It was you who won, because you helped me to rise
Date: 8/5/2013 5:21:00 PM
Awesome and vivid images.... congratulations.....
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/5/2013 7:47:00 PM
Thank you Donna
Date: 8/5/2013 12:32:00 PM
VERY POWERFUL WRITE, MANEL! Wow. The imagery is beautiful. What a superb dedication. Congrats on your well deserved win! :)
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/5/2013 7:47:00 PM
Thank you dearest Eileen
Date: 8/5/2013 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations Manel A beautiful account of a girl rising. As a child in Queensland we always played barefoot. Your feet do toughen to the terrain. Thanks for this memory. SuZ
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/5/2013 11:43:00 AM
Thank you Suz Dear, Thank you all soupies
Date: 8/5/2013 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations manel...excellent win:)
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/5/2013 11:42:00 AM
Thank you dearest Cherie
Date: 8/5/2013 9:51:00 AM
Manel Will yet again wins super poem congrats on your win Shadow x smiles
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/5/2013 11:42:00 AM
Thank you Shadow
Date: 8/5/2013 9:49:00 AM
:-) Congratulations!!! ~SKAT~
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/5/2013 11:42:00 AM
Thank you dear SKAT
Date: 8/5/2013 9:01:00 AM
Manel, ... Congratulations in Richard's "Girl Rising." contest.... always *LINDA
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/5/2013 11:41:00 AM
Thank you PD and my Soup friends. It is your inspiration and guide for my win. Thank you
Date: 7/28/2013 9:21:00 AM
Hello this is simply lovely but you entered it in the wrong contest 'Home Foreclosure" You need to withdraw it and re enter it in Richard's contest, Girl Rising. Thank you Judy Konos
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/5/2013 11:39:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 7/26/2013 11:28:00 AM
This poem bought back memories of when I was a child visiting my moms family in jamaica and I would always admire how people walked barefoot on the roads to get water, efortlessly on the jagged rocks. I love sri Lanka, journey amazing write manel Mutabaruka a poet from jamaica, has not worn shoes in 3 decades. He feels, Walking barefoot, keeps you grounded not just to the earth, but reminds you of who you are & where you come from love this poem thankyou..cherie
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/26/2013 11:43:00 AM
Thank you Dearest Cherry. I suppose in warm countries like Jamaica, Sri lanka etc, if you wear covered shoes all the time like you do in cold countries, you might develop fungal diseases. that may be why our people mostly wear slippers. But as you say bare foot is good for your health. i can recall an incident where i saw a well dressed in a lungi, upper middle class lady walking to a posh shopping mall bare foot, Thank you for your encouraging comments
Date: 7/26/2013 11:01:00 AM
I really felt this poem Manel.You write beautiful.
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Date: 7/26/2013 8:56:00 AM
Barefoot. I know what you mean. We wore shoes and were amazed.
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/26/2013 9:14:00 AM
Most of the Asians walk barefoot even now. It is told that, walking barefoot strengthens and stretches the muscles, in your feet, ankles and calves .Thanks for your comments
Date: 7/26/2013 6:30:00 AM
This one gave me chills, I am so proud of you. Thianks for entering my contest.
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/26/2013 6:37:00 AM
thank you for inspiring me Dear Richard

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