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"rise and Shine"

The morning sun rises like a beam of light stealing our shadows.... Windswept emotions cover our bodies that reflect from our windows.... We climb into each other like loose change in my pocket.... Our mind and souls are one as our lips find there way under this daybreak scene.... To freeze this moment would be like stopping the world from its lean.... We enjoy the coffee and a Danish's as the crumbs find there way down our cheeks... Our dreams are fed as the shower cools us as we plan for other peaks.... Now we start our day with a grin because we know rain or shine how it began.... .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/20/2010 11:48:00 PM
Very evocative & memorable opening couplet Michael>rgds Brian
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Date: 6/19/2010 1:45:00 PM
Wow beautiful poem! Going to my favorites!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/19/2010 1:27:00 PM
Well how about "bad" ..then "good"..haha.. thankxxx White Knight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/19/2010 6:38:00 AM
Secrets between lovers who are one..so beautiful Michael..that special glow is felt in your lines when two connect into one LUV and its magical.. enjoyed this refreshing poetry so early on a Saturday as I pack to leave Sunday.. will miss my White Knight .. hope all miss the "Sweetheart" too..with luv..
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:36:00 AM
Nice to read so brignt and early. Fits with todays movement, love the emotions on your poem, hvae a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:30:00 AM
My gosh....this is so good....I tried to make sunshine poems but not good as this...beautifully catch and lines full of pure poetry....I love it so much...really...^_^v
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