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Rise Above It

With sort of papers bend I can see it THE END Though trembling unseen Like forgot everything it seems Heart and pen are at sync Trying to overcome those obstacles Struggling that horrible fight As if fear had hold me tight It's all broken ,there is rage And confine in tag of failure cage Yeah I am lost in maze Fallen with every page Even life is difficult to cope But I won't lose it THAT HOPE I'll aim straight for my success Failing won't stop me from rising above I will try try until I succeed Won't let this failure breed I 'll root it our like a weed Then blossom with efforts in new seed A sheet of paper can't decide my future after all One never becomes failure with one fall Summoning knowledge and peace That's my very aim for top to cease I shall rise above it,I will rise above it 12 June 2016

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Date: 6/15/2016 1:37:00 PM
Very nicely written....and thanks for visiting my page....appreciate your lovely comments...
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Date: 6/16/2016 1:51:00 AM
Thankyou..your poems are really something
Date: 6/15/2016 12:23:00 AM
A very strong affirmation I admire your Use of word to tell a message. Very good
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Date: 6/16/2016 1:51:00 AM
Thankyou.....
Date: 6/14/2016 3:31:00 PM
Nicely done. I especially like the final verse.
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Date: 6/16/2016 1:49:00 AM
That one is my fav. too..
Date: 6/13/2016 11:52:00 AM
Really like this poem I like the part "I will try try until I succeed Won't let this failure breed" good job keep on writing
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Date: 6/14/2016 1:32:00 AM
thankyou..I really liked that pic of kaneki ken of tokyo ghouls
Date: 6/13/2016 5:39:00 AM
A wonderful and pretty write...... You shall rise above the ladder, AMEN. I enjoy reading your poem..........A.M.
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Date: 6/14/2016 1:33:00 AM
Thankyou..yeah I will...
Date: 6/12/2016 3:28:00 PM
A wonderful write with feeling, Lekhika, and the voice gave it life. Good luck in the contest. Bless you Eve
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thankyou...I will keep that in mind..~blessed~..
Date: 6/12/2016 8:56:00 AM
So moving hearing you read this wonderfully inspiring poem!
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Date: 6/12/2016 11:17:00 PM
thankyou..~blessed~...

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