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Severing the attachment, Desperate to liberate myself from self imprisonment, Each Separation ensuing with agony, Feeling as my own worst enemy, Further and further I tear, Seeking the long sought relief but it becomes to much to bear, Allowing the mold to feel anew, Leaving me in a state of subdue, Almost craving the need to illustrate some emotion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/20/2012 7:11:00 PM
The worst enemy we have is our restless mind......nothing hurts so much than low self esteem ..
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Ty Price
Date: 12/12/2013 11:54:00 PM
Well said!
Date: 9/20/2012 1:40:00 PM
TY, a very interesting way to describe self imprisonment. i say go with it... express your emotions.. enjoyed...pd
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Date: 12/12/2013 11:53:00 PM
Highly appreciated.
Date: 6/23/2012 1:09:00 AM
I love your last line Ty. Your poem is an illustration of your emotions! Welcome to PS. May you enjoy every verses you share with our wonderful community of poets in soup. Love Dalila
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Date: 6/23/2012 1:22:00 PM
thank you Dalila, im glad you enjoyed reading it. :) and so far i have enjoyed my time on here.
Date: 6/15/2012 12:05:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ty. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Ty Price
Date: 6/17/2012 1:35:00 AM
thank you very much Carol
Date: 6/13/2012 7:53:00 AM
THIS is your way of illustrating emotion, Ty! don't let the insides rip you apart, rip the frustration out into rhyme and poetry! it helps us all... =Juli-Michelle=
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Ty Price
Date: 6/13/2012 6:59:00 PM
Thank you, i recently got into poetry and have been using it for just that. displaying my emotions its been pretty awesome.

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