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Ride Sally Ride

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Ride Sally Ride

Rotgut ruined many a young man,
this ole town and the hooch.
This 'ere night the rains comin' down,
hey thar, Zach need a smooch?

Refrain

The night's real wet and the bed's warm;
we'll hoochie coochie all night long.
Hang up that hat bring 'ere that gun
ride ole Sal's coochie coo ...

I'll warm ya up though; I ain't cheap,
git your twin spurs right 'ere
'fore we go up and take a poke
why not buy me a beer?

Refrain

The night's real wet and the bed's warm;
we'll hoochie coochie all night long.
Hang up that hat bring 'ere that gun
ride ole Sal's coochie coo ...


Sure the cards call, you've got gold
but why spend it right thare?
There's two ripe peaches over 'ere
and a sweet plum; I swear.

Refrain

The night's real wet and the bed's warm;
we'll hoochie coochie all night long.
Hang up that hat bring 'ere that gun
ride ole Sal's coochie coo ...

Slow he came to his Sally ride
up the saloon's stair case.
Behind closed doors he spent the night
with 'er limbs interlaced.

Refrain

The night's real wet and the bed's warm;
we'll hoochie coochie all night long.
Hang up that hat bring 'ere that gun
ride ole Sal coochie coo ...



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  1. Date: 8/6/2014 2:08:00 AM
    love this Debbie :)

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 7:38:00 PM
    Hi DG, I'm only stopping by for the example... BUT WOW!! to your poem... You Rock...PD

  1. Date: 8/1/2014 9:23:00 AM
    This a poem that is not easy to ignore. Well done for penning a rare piece.

  1. Date: 7/29/2014 8:18:00 PM
    You my friend captured the life so well and did so in a very entertaining manner! This is a gem, a gem.. Fav'ing this because it is an awesome write! Thanks....

  1. Date: 7/26/2014 8:36:00 PM
    Every Zack needs a smooch from ole Sal! Very cleaver.. A well told story right out of Lonesome Dove.

  1. Date: 7/23/2014 4:22:00 PM
    Excellent write Debbie. reminds me of the old blues song 'Hoochie coochie man'. Hope it is a winner for you, my friend....peter

  1. Date: 7/23/2014 7:57:00 AM
    Ha! I have not heard liquor referee to as hooch in forever, nor heard the term hoochie coochie in eons!!!... Awesome, dear Debbie!... Gl in the contest my friend! Hugs.. Arlene

  1. Date: 7/22/2014 10:07:00 AM
    I love this humorous piece, straight to my favorites. Bravo.

  1. Date: 7/21/2014 3:19:00 PM
    ooohh la la ..clever and cute ..love yur talent xxx

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 9:14:00 AM
    Very nice write Debbie....enjoyed..best wishes in the contest....

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 2:21:00 AM
    Eloquent write Debbie! A lil humour adds on to the beauty always //Upma//

  1. Date: 7/19/2014 11:10:00 PM
    WHY DEBBIE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Peaches and a plum...hmmmmm...that spells yummy yum! You have written an exceptional piece. I like it! ;) I love you when you get a little naughty! Naughty...but nice! Hugs

  1. Date: 7/19/2014 10:29:00 PM
    what picture do you mean? Is it on the contest page? This is really good, Debs. you sure got into character for this one. I don't have a clue how to do this one!!

  1. Date: 7/19/2014 9:03:00 PM
    Ah this is real fun to read, it's tempting, I'd love to go visit that saloon and do a little coochie coo too, lol, nice to read such fun verse, sending my love xxx