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Riddles of Mom's Affections

Am I just too blind? For not seing the good intension of you? Am I just too deaf? For not hearing any good reason from you? Am I just too numb? For not sensing all the love that you shed? I thought I just too dead to live within your world No more words capable to solve Enough fed by your conflicts and dramas Understanding you cost the rest of my life Or I cost the rest of my life to understand the love of you We never really speak We puzzled in our own existences Knowing you is like walking in the dusty haze Knowing me is like climbing on a thousand feet of sturdy wall Talking about us Talking about spot that never been fully We lacked in our bond But still... This is the undeniable life From you I stand this day Wether I should regret or be thanked There will be no me without you There will be no us beyond you

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Karen Anglesey

Date: 4/14/2013 10:45:00 AM

Stunning vision of this relationship. Exceptional writing.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/14/2013 5:57:00 PM

Thank you Karen :D I think in the end of the stanza explained that this relationship is unbreakable after all :) glad to have a comment by you Karen :D wishing you a lovely day :) hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/12/2013 11:19:00 PM

Good morning Yanny see comment below. I hope you are greeted with a spectacular day and weekend.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/12/2013 11:41:00 PM

Hello Rick :D wishing you a spectacular one too :D hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/12/2013 9:33:00 AM

This is profound. I am sure many can relate to these sentiments. Well done Yanny.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/12/2013 11:40:00 PM

Thank you Rick, at that time I just remember 1 thing from my past about I was arguing about my mom's opinion which at the end i knew she was totally right about it, more or less our relationship quite complicated but basically we are needing one each other :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/12/2013 6:30:00 AM

Yanny; I agree with you. This is very true.Many blessings for you this day.....Lucilla

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/12/2013 11:35:00 PM

Thank you Luci glad to see you stopped by :D wishing you a wonderful weekend :D hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2013 11:42:00 AM

- A sad poem Yanny .... a bad mother and daughter relationship, it must feel like a wound in the heart for both of you - I hope that it is just "fantasy" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/12/2013 11:36:00 PM

Agree with that Rick :D

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/12/2013 11:18:00 PM

Everyone behaves based on the expriances they have lived. Only through new experiences can they be changed. You have a spirit of grace so I am sure your relationship will be blessed. All require forgiveness including ourselves.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/11/2013 7:58:00 PM

Sometimes a complicated situations brings them to a bad relationship at the end

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/11/2013 7:57:00 PM

Actually, this is a common thing these days the relationship between mother and her child, sometimes we as the child never understand the way they handle us and the way they tried to make us understand what she thinks about what's the best for us, and also same from the child side which is don't understand the way their parents want the best for them