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Old ideas, more like character defects-- no way to pay bills or get paychecks. Mind-aching explosion, put up the road blocks, ticking like a time bomb or a grandfather clock. Time's up, make a decision, something you can live with-- space just to breathe and enough room to pivot. Exquisite provisions-- invaded by religion. Predicaments that can change one's whole way of livin'. Conditions, they can make you or absolutely break you. Be wise with the lifestyle and morals that you take to. Make haste not to delay the truth inside the prelude and maybe one day you will finally have a breakthrough.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/22/2015 6:13:00 AM
straight out the best thing iv read on this site so far . keep it up, your words are real. none of that fantasy life bullshit.
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Date: 7/9/2014 12:18:00 AM
Patrick, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/7/2014 8:22:00 PM
K Patrick,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/7/2014 1:06:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Patrick. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/3/2014 11:14:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,K.Patrick :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. -// Anne-Lise :)
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