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Below is the poem entitled Rhythm which was written by poet misty hunter. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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You’re sittin beside me
The music playin
I bet you see
I’ve started swayin

Not to the tune
Ain’t listenin to em
what makes me swoon
Is your rhythm

I know you don’t hear
And right now
I don’t care
You just pretend it don’t show

I need this
I need you
Not lookin for a kiss
Just a view

It’s shallow
So what
Feeling hallow
My mouth is shut

Let this last
Just let me sway
No future, no past
Don’t send me away

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  1. Date: 1/23/2009 2:34:00 PM
    pretty and cute. a country song if i ever heard one. John H. Loving III