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Revolving Time

In a distant micro-second, I am holding hands with my Beloved Lenore A future second , Barbara Jean is the only one my Heart is beating for I meld into the pictures on the walls of my study : the Loves of my life My Mom : Stoic, defender of the agony of a scared little boy’s strife Jill : my second romance with a POETESS, but I used her as a replacement Tool Rhoda : Oh how she stirred my heart, but I was too Syrupy, I played the Fool In this now second, I find myself deeply entwined in the LOVE of BARBARA JEAN Each click of the clock takes me to the Past : the Present : The Future I have seen To be Continued at YOUR request

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/26/2010 11:25:00 AM

your ending sounds interesting. --Each click of the clock takes me to the Past : the Present : The Future I have seen-- so much that happens with people, a lot, but not all gain something in the mind.dreams may grow, vast visions even while awake. that is good that you found your heart on Barbara. i hope she treats you well. much love to you my brother spirit. -Always&Forever your spirit sister, Lynn

June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/25/2010 1:41:00 AM

Hi Harvey, you have alot of love in your life. That's good. Keep on writing abouit it. I'm enjoying the read. What sign are you? Just curious. I'm not that much into it. I'm a Jan Capricorn. Ellen

Sue Mason

Date: 2/1/2010 2:38:00 PM

Very clever beginning and I guess I am to read on ... smile ... nice to hear from you again Harvey ... it had been awhile and your recent comments were most welcome. I'm having a hard time keeping up with everyone and remembering to go back to some of my favorites ... smile ... And, when is your day/month of birth so I can add you to my cake fest blogs ...

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/14/2010 5:22:00 PM

Hey Pretty cool poem HG!! Long time no see! Just stirrin' up the soup and found you again, my friend! -Robert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/13/2010 8:31:00 AM

enjoyed

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/10/2010 4:44:00 PM

OK,I wrote another poem.I am 1 ahead of you. If you can't do it that is ok.It's not easy to write a suicide poem unless that is how you feel.Check out Time For a Change.I think you will like it.Hope all is well.

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/10/2010 4:44:00 PM

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/7/2010 10:24:00 AM

Hello just wanted to say hi.Haven't heard from you for a bit.Hope all is well.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/3/2010 2:00:00 PM

Your love for Your blessed Angel Lenore is beautiful,Im sure She doesnt want you to waste your beautiful Heart and is happy seeing You giving Your love to good friends here..LOVELY DEDICATION,If all married couples loved your way,there ll be no Divorce//Tnks for your poetry..Charma

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/3/2010 10:40:00 AM

new poem posted.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2010 9:04:00 AM

Your loves have intersting names! I like this one. It reminds me of times I think of past loves (so many, but they all happened before age 20 and now I am 34 years from then with ONE guy. Try that one on!!!) anyway, I have one in my far past that my heart still beats for and I always wonder. . . . (I bet you do the same for one of these!)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/2/2010 8:56:00 PM

Happy New Year to u HG and to BG .. cute couple u two when someone steals your heart away... gladly give u up as my beau to the gracious BG... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/2/2010 7:53:00 PM

HG, please continue at my request. See your mail.BG