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I walked into my darkened room Looking for a pen I couldn't see one So I put the light on And presto I found my pen Light is wonderful It reveals ©Brenda V northeast 2 march 2012

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Date: 3/2/2012 7:37:00 PM
Then you wrote this poem, I can almost see the light coming on Brenda. Your pen finds the right words in this sweet rhyme!
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Date: 3/2/2012 6:24:00 AM
yes what a glorious invention!! thanks for the comment on my work....I don't think alot of people get me....
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 3/2/2012 4:37:00 PM
Thank you Doris- the most important thing is that we be us, each is unique in their own way. Blessings, bren : )

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