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Restless

Beneath the veil of night Restless limbs lay tangled Amongst her linens and her doubts Sun kissed skin, remembering him Her fingers gently trace The faintest whisper of his touch Soft upon her breath, his name She must learn to say goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/17/2010 5:44:00 AM
You have presented to us very interesting poetry today. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup Windy. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/16/2010 2:26:00 PM
thank you!
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Date: 2/16/2010 10:59:00 AM
Again, i say your brillance, might outshine the starrs. please, never stop writing. always, Rain xoxo, blessed be.
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Date: 2/16/2010 9:24:00 AM
wow i cannot believe all the good poems i read that have no comments yet, and this is certainly one of them! it definitly embodies restlessness and is so sad the last line was the perfect choice. i loved it. =)jo
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