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Rest In Aqua

Rest In Aqua broken and orphaned from my mountainous mother to rest in aqua 21st February 2016 Contest: Monoku -7-on what you feel

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/1/2016 10:04:00 PM

I have to apologise, i forgot tom put the seven rating in. There is your seven, well deserved.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 9:15:00 PM

Thanks Raven! You are so kind!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/1/2016 10:02:00 PM

Hi Balveen, a belated congratulations on your winning Monoku in the contest. Really liked this one. A Seven.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 9:15:00 PM

A belated Thanks Raven!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2016 5:07:00 PM

wow, this is REALLY amazing for the one line and what it tells about the picture. it would have been higher on my own list! Congrats. Glad to finally see this one.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/27/2016 7:47:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! Wish you had judged! Love.....

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 2/22/2016 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations Balveen on your wonderful win in "In one line (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL" contest. You are truly amazing! :) -hans

Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/25/2016 6:27:00 AM

Thanks Hansteven!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/22/2016 5:59:00 AM

Oh yes...this goes so well with the sponsor's prompt, Balveen....the serenity and calm are reflected in your words. Congratulations!! // paul

Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/25/2016 6:28:00 AM

Thanks for all your appreciation Paul!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/21/2016 10:23:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Balveen..

Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/22/2016 12:29:00 AM

Thanks Upma!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 9:53:00 PM

Balveen, Congratulations on your awesome one line verse (monoku) what you SEE or FEEL win. It's an honor to have you support my contest once again. Stop by and enjoy my blog "Ashamed" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/22/2016 12:29:00 AM

Thanks Linda!