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Response To Smile

Finally something to make me smile Even if it is only for awhile Something to make me look forward to the day Even though i must fight to hear it say Something to change me Something i look forward to see Something to tilt my world upside down To make me smile and no longer frown Im smart so ill hold on to it Hopefully it feels the same, if only a little bit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/23/2009 8:57:00 AM
Your poem seems to say I do not trust this love. Why waste your time and hers if you have no trust. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2009 5:24:00 PM
hmm interesting. I like it. Autumn
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Date: 9/22/2009 4:39:00 PM
Third couplet is especially meaningful. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/22/2009 3:30:00 PM
To hear it say?
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