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Resolutions Resolved

What do I resolve for the coming new year? time just to myself, have I made myself clear? It's a matter of choice, well, and my career and I mean to do it without any fear. No more overtime work, I'll not volunteer. No breaks, no gossip, is that too cavalier? I'll leave work early, come in late, oh my dear, by now you realize; I'm less than sincere. I could give up moonlighting as a cashier, focus on being a fine financier. Or should I turn down gigs as a gondolier? Time for me, a resolution too severe. It's not gonna happen, I am happy here. written December 30, 2016 Resolutions contest

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Date: 1/10/2017 5:58:00 PM
Reason, very well written. Congratulations on your high placement.
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Date: 1/10/2017 8:08:00 PM
Thank you, Janis, I appreciate the read and the encouragement. Have a great day!
Date: 1/10/2017 8:42:00 AM
Reason, I love where your subconscious went as you wrote this poem! Just what I was looking for! Congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 1/10/2017 8:06:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, it was an enjoyable write, especially the monorhyme which perhaps was the most subconscious part. I dream in rhymes. Sometimes, I talk to my husband in rhymes.
Date: 1/6/2017 9:04:00 PM
This one's really good. The mood in which it was written is very comfortable, and it touches on what people actually go through when they choose resolutions for the new year.
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Date: 1/7/2017 6:28:00 PM
thanks, Grace. Glad you liked it. I'm wishing you the best of 2017 in poetry and all else that matters to you.

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