Resolution

My bonds are cut, My debts are paid, My sins cleared, My past left behind. My door has been opened, I take my first step in this uncharted territory. They crouch in the corner, Counting their coins, Trying to call me back. But this time, My sword is polished, My armour is put on, My horse is eager to run. I shall conquer this kingdom.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2016 10:26:00 PM

Edwin Hon, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/19/2016 7:38:00 PM

Good luck Edwin, in conquering (this kingdom) sounds like fun. My eyes are smiling (blind) on how shiny your sword is. A perfect 7 list write. Keep flourishing among the community. Glad you like it here so much, can't wait to read what else you have for us. I'm excited by the horseY imagery. Skat