Resignation

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pond geese are leaving for places I long to go…. warm breath on cold hands __________________________________________ Contest: Traditional Haiku Sponsor: Catie Lindsay 9/20/16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2016 12:24:00 AM

Smart Geese, I bet they are flying over my head right now. South Texas is the place to be. Enjoyed. LINDA

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/24/2016 12:59:00 PM

Perfect read since I just noticed how many, here, I have always followed... seem to have left...

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/21/2016 9:38:00 AM

Excellent, Mrs Carrie. I too want to go!

Lu Loo

Date: 9/21/2016 7:49:00 AM

Carrie- wonderful haiku...good luck :) congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Anthony Mark

Date: 9/21/2016 5:34:00 AM

Good visual, I'm not that up on Haiku's, but this captures the essence of one perfectly....ian

Constance La France

Date: 9/20/2016 9:45:00 PM

Carrie, this is wonderful, you painted a picture in a few words ~