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he opened the drapes to my soul and gently stepped into my life dusting my lonliness away bright shining light into my day removing cobwebs here and there slowly mopping my fears to nought painting a smile upon my face so calm and clear my heart in cheer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/26/2012 12:19:00 PM
A nice poem Treisha - I like it :) Have a enjoyable weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2012 10:26:00 AM
Very nice use of metaphors Treisha, i liked this , so simple yet so revealing
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Treisha Williams
Date: 10/26/2012 10:37:00 AM
thanks

Book: Shattered Sighs