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Rumpled lap where your purring body once slept....replaced by a crumpled heart. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: Sad One-Liner Sponsor: Silent One Judged: 10/12/2016

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Date: 10/13/2016 11:42:00 AM
tears...weep...tears... I know this pain all too well. It's raw in my soul today, I am sorry if you ever felt this way. It's awful. congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/12/2016 1:32:00 PM
Sweet, beautiful tribute, Sandra. Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 10/12/2016 11:14:00 AM
Such is the loss of such unconditional love, congratulations Sandra...
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Date: 10/12/2016 11:10:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Sandra - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/12/2016 8:12:00 AM
So sad. So touchy. Once I felt such pain for a street dog liked by me.
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Date: 10/12/2016 3:21:00 AM
That is quite sad. Excellent one liner.
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Date: 10/11/2016 5:24:00 PM
Awww - that *is* sad. I have an old cat and know I will miss her very much when she is no longer with us.
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Date: 10/11/2016 2:30:00 PM
OK, this is darned good and relates to my own departed, much loved pets, but this is it - I can't take any more sad one-liners, nope - yours put me over, maxed me out. HA Good luck always, Sandra ... CayCay
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/11/2016 4:42:00 PM
Yes, I am sure you know the pain, CayCay...they become family. I just finished reading all the funny one-liners...perhaps I will wait for the sad ones! Thanks for your visit and nice comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/11/2016 10:42:00 AM
Very sad Sandra:-( hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/11/2016 4:40:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. We had our dear Charlie cat for twenty years, and he left us a few years ago and is still dearly missed. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/11/2016 10:08:00 AM
This is very sad, Mrs Sandra. If it is reality, I am sorry for your loss:(
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/11/2016 4:38:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. My Charlie Cat of 20 years passed away quite some time ago but is still dearly missed. Sandra

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