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Below is the poem entitled Repentance which was written by poet Sara Kendrick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Disagreement within the family..The Bible says don't let the sun go down on your wrath..We did let it go down on our wrath which is not good...A new day has dawned with forgiveness now..

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Gray clouds amassed coat the morn sky
Damp fills air birds chatter near by
There is not peace within
What will come from the clouds_unknown
Will today there be a storm blown
Or will those just have been

There is heaviness of heart
From disturbance that is my part
Lord, help me settle now
Hard feelings do not need to have
Love can not flow in need of salve
Lord, let me repent now

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  1. Date: 5/7/2012 8:52:00 AM
    a lovely spiritual piece, my friend - one we all need to follow

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 11:17:00 PM
    I like how you related nature to repentance in this one, Sara. You are such a spiritual person. (the Captcha this time says STAR!!!)

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 1:34:00 PM
    Beautiful Sara, just beautiful !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 12:47:00 PM
    What a beauty! Great write, dear Sara! God bless you. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 10:06:00 AM
    Ps. Smile ˜ "The Searcher of Hearts * I Love Your Beautiful Poem & Its Beauty Shall Be A Favourite, Just Like 'You.'" ˜

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 9:57:00 AM
    Smile ˜ Shall I Be Completely Open & Honest With This, Your Precious Beauty, My Dear Beautiful, Beautiful Sara * Not Even The Angels Fallon At This Point In Time, I Believe, Are Beyound Loves Redemption ˜ We As Humanity These Tiny Babies In Truth, Were Given The Gift Of Love Endless, Upon A Cross * A Verse In Redemption Written Amid The Stars, Afore The Foundation Borne * Your Beautiful Poem, Is A Bright Light Stirring Deep Inside, Love's Endless Heart * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

    Date: 5/4/2012 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."Also, Thank You For Your Beauties Visit * I Count It As Only 'Joy.'" ˜
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 7:54:00 AM
    Ive never read a tail-rhyme before Sara, Im pleased yours is the first I ever have, lovely write xxx Hugs