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Remote Wars

General Hospital, or Family Fued The stakes were high No one willing to lose The stage was set for the ensuing war Wills would clash And egos held the floor With nostrils flared, she stated her case I stood firm Her words a waste I snatched the remote, did my victory dance She stormed off With a wicked glance I was enjoying it all, then heard my phone She hoped i would be happy Eating all alone So General Hospital, was very good today In every victory Theres a price you pay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/22/2013 7:35:00 PM
This is creative and humorous From beginning to end you keep the reader captivated to see what happens Nice job Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Habits poem. I appreciate it.
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Date: 5/4/2013 11:33:00 AM
It's amazing where we draw our boundries in this day and age.
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Date: 5/3/2013 4:12:00 PM
hahaha. Very apt title, Carl. I sometimes wish for a TV screen with more than one division. An entertaining write, my friend. :)
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Date: 5/1/2013 3:10:00 PM
LOL :-) I just love this so much Carl, ~SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2013 3:24:00 PM
Oh yes Carl, i like this, love how you have structure the poem, also interesting subject...
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