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Remote Wars

General Hospital, or Family Fued
The stakes were high
No one willing to lose

The stage was set for the ensuing war
Wills would clash
And egos held the floor

With nostrils flared, she stated her case
I stood firm 
Her words a waste

I snatched the remote, did my victory dance
She stormed off
With a wicked glance

I was enjoying it all, then heard my phone
She hoped i would be happy
Eating all alone

So General Hospital, was very good today
In every victory
Theres a price you pay

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  1. Date: 10/22/2013 7:35:00 PM
    This is creative and humorous From beginning to end you keep the reader captivated to see what happens Nice job Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Habits poem. I appreciate it.

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 11:33:00 AM
    It's amazing where we draw our boundries in this day and age.

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 4:12:00 PM
    hahaha. Very apt title, Carl. I sometimes wish for a TV screen with more than one division. An entertaining write, my friend. :)

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 3:10:00 PM
    LOL :-) I just love this so much Carl, ~SKAT

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:24:00 PM
    Oh yes Carl, i like this, love how you have structure the poem, also interesting subject...

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 10:39:00 AM
    Nice! I love it :) I figured you were referring to the television show! Well done!