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Remembering You

REMEMBERING YOU Grey billowing smoke, seeing embers snap Down in the valley away from the woods The bonfire blazes as we sip hot chocolate Marshmallow caress our lips The smell of fungi in fall is here Pleasant were our memories of summer The green grass, the yellow stingers The laughter playing while tumbling Barefooted in the warmth of each other But you are gone, and new friends sing Together our chorus loudly brings The season of plenty, our time of death Though distantly, I’ll remember you As the Blue Bird of Happiness bequest ©2016 Bonnie Jennings All Rights Reserved

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Date: 6/3/2017 10:23:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem,it s very lovely and you ve describe the scene beautifully however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Bonnie Jennings
Date: 6/3/2017 11:35:00 AM
Thanks for reading this poem and commenting so nicely. In all honesty, it has been awhile since I have written poetry. It comes and goes and it has left me for some time. This morning I wrote one, and posted it here. I will do my best to watch for your work; although, I'm not here very often. Thank you for stopping by...
Date: 11/29/2016 1:52:00 PM
A lovely,descriptive poem ... very nostalgic. Very nice Bonnie
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Bonnie Jennings
Date: 12/27/2016 9:19:00 AM
Oh, I apologize for not responding earlier. I have not been on PoetrySoup lately and I missed your wonderful comment. Thank you so much for reading...

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