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Years ago that young love did flow..Time has brought a comfortable love and hoping that we never have to part..Sara
. Remembering when we were very young You were straight, tall, handsome Love was in the bud and thoughts turned to only you Remembering when "I" thought of you with sighs Remembering when "miss" described your absence Remembering only "him" when it comes to kisses, hugs Remember saying "in" into my heart forever Remembering when "the" kisses were long Remembering the "weeping" when you went away Remembering not one "of" many, only you Remembering now "the" comfortable love Remembering now "rain" when you are away Contest: Middle Of The Road Sponsor: HGarvey Daniel Esquire Written by: Sara Kendrick Quoted line from Edna St. Vincent Millay

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Date: 2/12/2012 3:25:00 AM
SARA,,, ANOTHER WONDERFUL CONGRATS... HEADING OFF TO BED... GOOD NIGHT..ALWAYS..PD
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Date: 2/7/2012 9:00:00 PM
Dear Sara, I just want to Congratulate YOU For YOUR 2nd Place Win, in my Contest "Middle of the Road" My Favorite Classic POETESS is Elizabeth Barret Browning, my second Edna St. Vincent Millay I have her POEM "Time Does Not Bring Relief:You All Have Lied" in my Archives. Thank-YOU for supporting my Contest, LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:34:00 AM
A belated congratulations to you on your win in HG's "Middle Of The Road" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 7:50:00 AM
Congratulation, sorry for late. bl
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Date: 2/5/2012 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your place sara,well deserved x
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Date: 2/5/2012 3:56:00 AM
Excellent write. Congrats on the win, it was well deserved.............S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/4/2012 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Sara. I will remember this one.
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Date: 1/9/2012 2:39:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Sara. I must read some Edna SVM sometime
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Date: 1/8/2012 4:27:00 PM
Excellent! This one is SO a winner. Very nice write. "I miss him in the weeping of the rain"...that's just beautiful Always, Laura
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Date: 1/8/2012 9:12:00 AM
Such an interesting way to write that I've just recently noticed... You truly made it come alive with such touching thoughts.
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Date: 1/8/2012 5:52:00 AM
Super,perfect,brilliant...!!!Love it Sara!!!! OXOX love Anne-Lise *love memories - :)
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Date: 1/8/2012 3:46:00 AM
This is wonderful Sara, so profound, love the middle bit too, good luck with this in the contest. harry
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Date: 1/8/2012 12:51:00 AM
i know just how it feels! creatively done and superbly written Sara. good luck on the contest
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Date: 1/7/2012 9:42:00 PM
Wow! Triangular effects described wonderfully. Brilliant work done. Thanks for sharing, my friend. bl
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Date: 1/7/2012 7:11:00 PM
enjoyed reading your wonderful memories, jag
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Date: 1/7/2012 4:00:00 PM
nicely done good luck in the contest. cory
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Date: 1/7/2012 1:39:00 PM
Very nicely written piece of memories that still live and breathe... luv Michael
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Date: 1/7/2012 1:26:00 PM
Lovely quote...and wonderful memories. Enjoyed the poem !!
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